Are wah, khub j saras. Bahu vakhte achheri khushi ni laher avi ne tari yado ma.... Dil ma kharekhar yad bani ne vasi gai a gazal, bhale ne pachi te vagar yade lakhi hoy tari a gazal...
Any work of creativity is always appreciable. Its really very impressive to see your effort to keep alive the Gujarati Sugam Sangeet, the heart of 'Gujarati Music'. The community and its work really is 'Dhabkar' for Gujarati Sangeet. Keep working with same spirit buddy and you will definitely achieve higher and higher altitudes. Best of luck and give your best always....
પહેલી બે અને છેલ્લી બે લાઈન ખુબ જ ગમી, આટલી તિવ્રતાથી તમને કોઇની યાદ આવે છે એ જાણીને આનંદ થયો ... મજાક નથી આ, કારણ કે લાગણીઓ વિના કોઇ પણ રચના શક્ય જ નથી. એવુ મારું માનવું છે.
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Khuba j sundar...
"Ha haji pan yaad ni chhe yaad taji etle...."
Dil ne sparshi jaay chhe jo mane aa tari gazal...
Regards...
Dharini...
Are wah, khub j saras. Bahu vakhte
achheri khushi ni laher avi ne tari yado ma....
Dil ma kharekhar yad bani ne vasi gai a gazal, bhale ne pachi te vagar yade lakhi hoy tari a gazal...
kem cho kankshit bhai?
all peoms are nice,
and a fariyad koni hu karu, is the same one which u sung in college festival?
nari pase recorded che, pan i dont remember all stanza,
its is a beautiful composition, music is exact of urdu gazal,
keep on writing such beautiful, composable poems.
if u want i will give u the recording of this gazal, u post in on ur blog,
BUT U HAVE TO SAY I GAVE IT TO U TO ALL~~~
bye bye
owsome poem
khub saras, majha padi gai.
it is very original and that is best part,
many ppl write but they influence from other poet or copy,
ur no any seem like copy
it is nice,
khub saras, majha padi gai.
it is very original and that is best part,
many ppl write but they influence from other poet or copy,
ur no any seem like copy
it is nice,
ઘણા સમય પછી સારી ગઝલ વાચી
ખુબ આનન્દ થાયો
આભાર
મહેશ પરમાર " પ્રકાશ"
Hi Shafaq,
Any work of creativity is always appreciable. Its really very impressive to see your effort to keep alive the Gujarati Sugam Sangeet, the heart of 'Gujarati Music'. The community and its work really is 'Dhabkar' for Gujarati Sangeet. Keep working with same spirit buddy and you will definitely achieve higher and higher altitudes. Best of luck and give your best always....
Regards
Rohit Trivedi.
rohit.trivedi81@gmail.com
bahuj saras lakhai che,
vadhu to shu kahun,
pan as a sister,i feel good reading ur ghazal with positivity...
keep it up....bhai
fariyad koni hu karu?
tari k tari yaad ni?
vyakti ne teni yaad vacche ni a samyata, ane te samyata ma chhupeli vyataha nu khub tadrashy varnan,
khub saras,
nice dear i cant write much in words but still know that nice creation keep it up god bless you all the best
u know kankshit,
i always knew u would b a good poet!!!!!
m b ur dialouges and that play writer in u were always a treat!!!!
i hope u post in some of ur dialouges which u used to write and narrate for the school plays....
Remember that character muchhadsing pehelvan of urs???
ha ha ha good old days....
best of luck buddy....
and ya, i hope u r doing equally good professionally!
Dhaval Shah
SDS for u!!!!
waah dost.....
ekdam sachu lakhyu chhe.jyare vahli vyakti door hoy ane teni yaad aave tyare ani a juni palo ni yaadghanu badhu kae jaay chhe....
really touchy....
ખુબબબ જ સરસ
પહેલી બે અને છેલ્લી બે લાઈન ખુબ જ ગમી,
આટલી તિવ્રતાથી તમને કોઇની યાદ આવે છે એ જાણીને આનંદ થયો ... મજાક નથી આ, કારણ કે લાગણીઓ વિના કોઇ પણ રચના શક્ય જ નથી. એવુ મારું માનવું છે.
First stanza 'dad' magi le tevo che, had a chance to read other gazals as well, really nice....
khub j saras ama pan intajhari ni kalam..to khub j saras lakhi che..
To begin with...Good Effort & Well Said. Just keep in mind, Gazals need not always be saddist. Next time may be you can write some thing juvinating.
soooooooo...... nice!!!
welcome to blog-world !!
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