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bauj saras lakhai che..hradayni vednanu navi rit nu nirupan...keep it up!
wah kankshit bhai wahback with a bang, kehvu padshe bhai!!!ghanuj saras...lagbhag 1 mahina pachi lakhayeli a rachna ma dard, prem, maitri, kudrat ni karigari, baddha rango no saras upiyog thayo che...ek chitrakar jem ghana badha rango thi 1 chitra banave, em tame ghana badha rango vapri ne a rachna banavi...ghano andnd thayo
wah kankshit bhai khubaj saras rachna
ભાઈ શ્રી,"શફક"રચના એકંદરે સારી લખાઈ છે,પણ વાંચતા-વાંચતા એમ લાગ્યું કે જાણે છંદ તૂટયો છે ક્યાંક,જરા ચેક કરજે હો!
V nice. Khub saras lakhi chhe,Pan dard bharyu chhe ema...tem chhata prem, mitrata chhlakay chhe..keep it up.. Congrates...
ખૂબ સુંદર રચના.... છંદ જળવાયો હોય તો અવશ્ય મૂલ્યવાન થઈ શકે...નજરોથી તારી ઉતરું તો એમ ઉતરું,આંસુ બનીને આંખથી તારી વહી શકું...- આ શે'ર તો બેમિસાલ થયો છે... ખૂબ ખૂબ અભિનંદન !
very nice,this is like a perfect gazal..all shades. not about one topic only...a perfect gazal is one which talks about various shades of life, like this one...keep it up..was worth seeing your websitethank you
la javab...hum bhi thodi gujarati samajhne lage hai!!!!
hi,U R THE BEST!!!!!kok divas amara mate b lakho sir!!!
Humm what to say mast che ekdam as k sampurna prem prem nu dard ek gazal ma redi didhu che mann bahu nahi kahu vadhu you can understand better than me though i say or do not say god bless you all the best
suddar rachana ...........
really nice one....
gr8 going dude!!!liked the 3rd and the last phrase the most!!!
verry nice.congrates.bass aavi sunder rachana ni bhet amne satat aapta raho.keep it up.
great selection of words..nice workbut can be imporved
Gazal no abhari chhu hu tari,tari rachnao no diwano chhu hu bhariIts very nice and keep it up hu aane compose karvano try karish i like it too much Vah... Vah...!!!
છેલ્લો શેર બહુ જ ગમ્યો .
kanshiit you r do realy good work kharekhar i like most realy tamari darek rachana pehla karta vadhare sarij hoy che
najaro thi tari utari shaku...khub j saras lakhai che..amazing rachana..keep it up.
khub aj saras...koi ni pan najro thi uttari javay ne mann ma jaara pan dukh na thay evo sher che chello..kharu kahu to tabib nu kam karo cho tame! saro marham banavo cho!bohot acchhe....God bless you...
nicely writtenclose to heart
સરસ રચના... બીજો અને છઠ્ઠો અશઆર વધુ ગમ્યાં.આજે જ તમારો બ્લોગ જોયો... હાર્દિક અભિનંદન !
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bauj saras lakhai che..
hradayni vednanu navi rit nu nirupan...
keep it up!
wah kankshit bhai wah
back with a bang, kehvu padshe bhai!!!
ghanuj saras...
lagbhag 1 mahina pachi lakhayeli a rachna ma dard, prem, maitri, kudrat ni karigari, baddha rango no saras upiyog thayo che...
ek chitrakar jem ghana badha rango thi 1 chitra banave, em tame ghana badha rango vapri ne a rachna banavi...
ghano andnd thayo
wah kankshit bhai
khubaj saras rachna
ભાઈ શ્રી,"શફક"
રચના એકંદરે સારી લખાઈ છે,પણ વાંચતા-વાંચતા એમ લાગ્યું કે જાણે છંદ તૂટયો છે ક્યાંક,જરા ચેક કરજે હો!
V nice. Khub saras lakhi chhe,
Pan dard bharyu chhe ema...
tem chhata prem, mitrata chhlakay chhe..
keep it up.. Congrates...
ખૂબ સુંદર રચના.... છંદ જળવાયો હોય તો અવશ્ય મૂલ્યવાન થઈ શકે...
નજરોથી તારી ઉતરું તો એમ ઉતરું,
આંસુ બનીને આંખથી તારી વહી શકું...
- આ શે'ર તો બેમિસાલ થયો છે... ખૂબ ખૂબ અભિનંદન !
very nice,
this is like a perfect gazal..
all shades. not about one topic only...
a perfect gazal is one which talks about various shades of life, like this one...
keep it up..
was worth seeing your website
thank you
la javab...
hum bhi thodi gujarati samajhne lage hai!!!!
hi,
U R THE BEST!!!!!
kok divas amara mate b lakho sir!!!
Humm what to say mast che ekdam as k sampurna prem prem nu dard ek gazal ma redi didhu che mann bahu nahi kahu vadhu you can understand better than me though i say or do not say god bless you all the best
suddar rachana ...........
really nice one....
gr8 going dude!!!
liked the 3rd and the last phrase the most!!!
verry nice.congrates.bass aavi sunder rachana ni bhet amne satat aapta raho.keep it up.
great selection of words..
nice work
but can be imporved
Gazal no abhari chhu hu tari,
tari rachnao no diwano chhu hu bhari
Its very nice and keep it up hu aane compose karvano try karish i like it too much
Vah... Vah...!!!
છેલ્લો શેર બહુ જ ગમ્યો .
kanshiit
you r do realy good work kharekhar i like most realy tamari darek rachana pehla karta vadhare sarij hoy che
najaro thi tari utari shaku...khub j saras lakhai che..amazing rachana..keep it up.
khub aj saras...
koi ni pan najro thi uttari javay ne mann ma jaara pan dukh na thay evo sher che chello..
kharu kahu to tabib nu kam karo cho tame!
saro marham banavo cho!
bohot acchhe....
God bless you...
nicely written
close to heart
સરસ રચના... બીજો અને છઠ્ઠો અશઆર વધુ ગમ્યાં.
આજે જ તમારો બ્લોગ જોયો... હાર્દિક અભિનંદન !
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