Mast che ekdam as k ek gazal 2 mann 1 situation ne present kare che bahu nahi kahu you can understand better than me though i say or do not say god bless you all the best
hey.. its really very nice... actually i dont think i have enough knowledge to give u a comment on this!! just wishing you good luck for the future in all you do...
ખુબ જ સુંદર રચના છે, આથી જ વધુ એક વખત લખવાની ઇચ્છા થઇ આવી. અહીં રદીફ અને કાફીયો એવી વાત કહે છે કે એકદમ સરળ ભાષામાં મનમાં વસી જાય, એક પરફેક્ટ ગઝલ. KEEP ON WRITING MORE AND MORE ALL THE BEST GOD BLESS YOU
Bhaav sundar Chhe, pan METER tute chhe, Mumabi maa dhabkar ni bethak pachhi, Shree Girshbhai Joshi, Shree Pareshbhai Pandya vagere guNi jano nu ej kahevu hatu ke,sau Navsarjako ne kavita ma BHaav, sheriyat ane Chhand badhu jaLvaay e shikhdavavaa maate Workshop karvaa, uprant, kavita ni prasuti kem karvi, vagere no pan abhyaas karvo. jai gurjari, chetan framewala
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Mast che ekdam as k ek gazal 2 mann 1 situation ne present kare che bahu nahi kahu you can understand better than me though i say or do not say god bless you all the best
ખુબ જ સુંદર ભાવ રજુ કર્યા છે, સીધા હ્રદયમાં ઉતરી જાય.....
hey.. its really very nice... actually i dont think i have enough knowledge to give u a comment on this!! just wishing you good luck for the future in all you do...
V. Nice realy. Touchy,,
Keep it up.
ekdm sundar rachana
4th sher gnao undo che...
atlu bhare lakhvu a pan a ummar ma!!
wah,
cool job dude!!!
seems the season of metered gazals is back!!!
keep it up
khubaj saras rachna
aakhri sher saras lakhayo che,
saru vazan jalwayu chhe ggazal ma,
pan matla par jarak kaam vadhare karsho to aur rangat avshe..
faiz anwar "waris"
(gazal vaibhav group)
ખુબ જ સુંદર રચના છે, આથી જ વધુ એક વખત લખવાની ઇચ્છા થઇ આવી. અહીં રદીફ અને કાફીયો એવી વાત કહે છે કે એકદમ સરળ ભાષામાં મનમાં વસી જાય, એક પરફેક્ટ ગઝલ. KEEP ON WRITING MORE AND MORE ALL THE BEST GOD BLESS YOU
its beautiful..
વાયરો થઈ ને ગાતી વેણુ!
માધવ માધવ રાત થઈ છે
wah.....
i dont think this needs comments!!!
keep the good work going...
vry gud
Bhaav sundar Chhe,
pan METER tute chhe,
Mumabi maa dhabkar ni bethak pachhi, Shree Girshbhai Joshi, Shree Pareshbhai Pandya vagere guNi jano nu ej kahevu hatu ke,sau Navsarjako ne kavita ma BHaav, sheriyat ane Chhand badhu jaLvaay e shikhdavavaa maate Workshop karvaa, uprant, kavita ni prasuti kem karvi, vagere no pan abhyaas karvo.
jai gurjari,
chetan framewala
kankshit bhai jay jay,
gazal saras che, hu chetan bhai ni meter ganatri na paksh ma 100%nathi, pan temni vaat pan 100% khoti nathi
1 sher ma meter ni kami chhokhi dekhay che, baki akkhi gazal meter pramanej che.
ane ha, a j sanskrut no chhand aap a vapryo te aaj na jamana ma vaprato jaoi anad thayo!
gamyu k kok la ga ga ne laghu guru thi vadhu undu utri ne lakhvano prayatna kari rahyu che..
ma saraswati ne prarthna k aap ne ghanu saru lakhvani prerna arpe..
malta rehjo...
paresh na hari om
Dr. Paresh soni
Gujarat Sahitya Parishad
gr8 work kanshit
keep the good work going
hi,, nice one yaar.
Gazal Sari lage che jyare te gazal rupe hoy che....
khub sundar rachna!
wonderful keep it up
bau mast lakhyu chhe kankshit..evu lagyu ke jane maro potano j koi anubhav chhe...Keep Writing...God Bless...
REALLY A NICE GAZAL... good going.. all the best..
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