Monday, May 5, 2008

શંકા મને થઇ

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

apani rajuvat gami,gazal vishe shu lakhu..gazal vachine lootela anand no amane santosh chhe...rahi vaat gazalkar ni atale appni ...to janilo vishesh ane sundar gazal rachanar hamesha vishesh ane sundar hoi chhe..ama mane koi Sanka Nathi!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

TAME VISHESH GAZALKAR CHHO AMA AMANE KOI SHANKA NATHI....JO KE APPNI SHANKA PAN SUNDAR CHHE ..

vishruti said...

લખવી નતી ગઝલ, છતાં, આ જો ને શું થયું?
લખાઇ ગઇ કાગળ ઉપર, ને શંકા મને થઇ
Really very nice, no words to say actually what to say, it's just superb. All The Best God Bless YOu

jigna said...

Its v nice gazal ke ene mate koi shanka nathi,,
keep it up...

Bubblegum.... said...

good one indeed!

સુરેશ જાની said...

બહુ જ સરસ રચના. સાવ નવા જ રદીફ અને કાફીયા.
મને શંકા પડે છે ... અને જલન માતરી યાદ આવી ગયા!

Anonymous said...

wah ustad wah..

shu gazal che...

aabhar...

Anonymous said...

kankshit,

aap aavij rachnao thi sahu ne mantramugdh karta raho, evi prabhune prarthna.

MA saraswati ni aap par aseem krupa rahe tevi asha..

gazal vishe kahu, to em lage che k jane have aap na kavya sanghrah ne prakashit karvano samay paki gayo che!

karo kamku na...


ej,

snehadhin

Shah kaka

A life......... said...

good, specially last 3rd and 4th line..Keep writing

Anonymous said...

khub saras lakhi chhe kankshit....
keep it up....

Deeps said...

nice one

Krishna The Universal Truth.. said...

SUPERB EXCELLENT ......EVN I HAVE NO WORD FOR UR ALL POEM KANKSHIT JI....U R JUST GR8 .....

Anonymous said...

kankshit,

khub subndar rachna